Crafting a Compelling Act Two: Insights from Divine Rivals
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Welcome to the Reading for Writers Challenge, a 100-day journey dedicated to exploring Middle Grade and Young Adult literature with a focus on writing techniques. I’m excited to share my insights as I delve into these books alongside fellow writers and enthusiasts of MG and YA.
Today’s focus: Divine Rivals, Chapters 15-24
With the establishment of its world—a fictional early 20th-century realm filled with warring deities and magical elements—Divine Rivals introduces us to a protagonist searching for her missing brother while wielding a magical typewriter. As we transition into Act Two, an adventure unfolds!
Act Two: Understanding Structure
While narrative structures often reference three acts, many argue that stories can be more accurately divided into four acts. Act Two is typically the longest, offering a wealth of content that some prefer to split into two sections: 2a and 2b. This breakdown leads to an eight-sequence structure, which can simplify the storytelling process without being overly prescriptive.
Utilizing this eight-sequence framework, the narrative segment between the Lock-in and the Midpoint encompasses sequences three and four. According to the Save the Cat method, this part is referred to as the Fun and Games section, while Tom Vaughan labels them First Steps and First Attempts.
First Steps
In the First Steps sequence, the main character begins to navigate their new environment. They encounter new allies and gather the resources and knowledge needed for their journey. This is often where a new character—such as a sidekick or love interest—is introduced, much like Han Solo in the Mos Eisley Cantina.
Iris, who has forfeited her chance at a coveted column with the Gazette, embarks on her role as a war correspondent. Before her journey, she meets the editor at the Inkridden Tribune, uncovering the truth about her magical typewriter. On her train ride west, she bonds with a fellow young correspondent, forging a new friendship. Upon reaching Avalon Bluff, Marisol, the owner of their bed-and-breakfast, becomes another ally.
As Iris navigates this new world, she learns vital survival skills related to the dangers of sirens. Creatures that were once mere legends in the city now pose very real threats. She begins her quest to locate her brother, engaging with soldiers in a hospital and listening to their harrowing tales.
In many fantasy narratives, the story world feels entirely separate, akin to A Wrinkle in Time. In Divine Rivals, however, the magic is subtle, with the real differences stemming from the proximity to conflict and Iris’s newfound independence. The monstrous entities symbolize the harsh realities of 20th-century warfare.
Amidst these challenges, Iris discovers that her typewriter continues to connect her to her enigmatic friend, deepening their growing romance.
First Attempts
Following the First Steps, we enter the First Attempts sequence, where the protagonist takes action toward their goals, albeit with their old mindset and methods, which ultimately leads to setbacks.
Iris reaches out to military officials in hopes of finding her brother, yet her efforts yield little success. Meanwhile, her correspondence with Roman grows increasingly personal. Despite knowing he should reveal his true identity, he grapples with uncertainty about how to proceed. Readers can sense an impending conflict brewing.
Roman, on the other hand, shares a lunch with his arranged fiancée, where he is disturbed by the cold, calculated nature of their union and the ominous weapon they are developing. This is not the life he desires, yet he feels trapped.
After returning to work, he reads Iris's first article from the front lines, which inspires him. Her courageous writing resonates deeply with him, marking a pivotal moment in his journey.
Lesson Learned
As you navigate this section, resist the urge to overload the narrative with complications. It’s essential to allow readers to acclimate to the Act Two world along with the protagonist. When juggling dual plotlines—such as a dramatic question and a romantic arc—be mindful of the groundwork needed to develop both, ensuring a smoother experience for your readers. There will be plenty of opportunities to intensify the drama in Act 2b.
Next, we’ll delve into the Midpoint.
Stay tuned for more insights!
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